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David D. Levine
12 October 2004 @ 10:28 pm
Word count: 103880 | Since last entry: 493 | This month: 1419

Hare reveals her reasons for returning, which are not as altrustic as Clarity had expected. Nor, frankly, as I'd expected. But when I actually wrote the speech I realized that Hare's priorities are not Clarity's and the thing that would drive her over the edge is not what matters most to Clarity, or to the reader. This way also will help to drive Jason harder in the following chapter.

Meanwhile, I'm getting antsy for responses to short story submissions from a couple of markets that have been sitting on stories a lot longer than usual, plus another market that is known for long response times but this is getting ridiculous. I hope these long response times are indicative of good news, but I know that isn't always the case. (Whine, whine, whine.)