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David D. Levine
07 February 2006 @ 10:28 pm
Word count: 4859 | Since last entry: 348

Okay, I've passed the point I stopped in the first pass and the story's beginning to move now. I've got a couple of people who are clearly pissed at the protagonist, and though he understands the immediate causes he has no idea why they are so upset with him for what seems like minor transgressions. At this point he doesn't even quite realize just how much trouble he's in.

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